Love’s Fate
By simply touching someone, Lissa can tell who their true love is, but it doesn't work on her. As she rises in popularity, Skeptic Magazine sends out their top reporter, Tom, a naturally handsome man, for the story. He soon discovers her to be much more interesting than her story. But after a lifetime of heartbreak, Lissa wants nothing to do with him. Right?
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It’s not meant to be a rom-com. We’ll see what I can do about the irony.
I like Torrie’s description of Lissa as a clairvoyant. Maybe a possible logline could read, “An attractive clairvoyant, enslaved by loneliness can foretell true love for others, but not for herself.”
I agree with refining it down, fewer words, but the exact nature of her ability – touching someone and predicting their true love – is unique and interesting, and I think you need to keep it in…
” A heartbroken clairvoyant’s life is tested when a sceptic journalist not only questions her ability but is predicted to be the love of her life.”
If you inlcude some irony it sounds better. Also sounds like a more interesting rom com of a movie.
“When a heartbroken clairvoyant is interviewed by a skeptical journalist,
she must (insert goal), before he finishes the story.”
Try to simplify the process down to the basics and to keep it under 25 words or less.
Remember to only include the most important facts that create a solid foundation.