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tloiselle
Posted: January 19, 20132013-01-19T09:39:46+10:00 2013-01-19T09:39:46+10:00In: Public

Cadence, a twenty-something deadbeat, devises a scheme to steal doughnuts from a local bakery, to regain her ex-boyfriend's affection.

Glazed Heist

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    1. 2013-01-23T04:45:20+10:00Added an answer on January 23, 2013 at 4:45 am

      Thanks for the input! I wrote the screenplay already and it is a full feature length script. I’ll rework the logline and post it here.

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    2. sharkeatingman
      2013-01-20T16:02:38+10:00Added an answer on January 20, 2013 at 4:02 pm

      No need to mention protag’s name, unless famous (nice name…probably goose-steps when she walks, though…)

      You have to explain why stealing doughnuts will regain his affection; is it just because he likes doughnuts? It’s cute, but I can’t see it as anything more than a short.

      Geno Scala (sharkeatingman)- judge

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