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Posted: April 11, 20212021-04-11T10:36:49+10:00 2021-04-11T10:36:49+10:00In: Fantasy

Misopedist Captain James Hook must confront his tortured past when he is forced to rescue a group of children held hostage by the demon boy, Peter Pan.

Title: “The Neverland Horror.”

Genre: horror/fantasy.

In this story, Captain James Hook and Wendy Darling are the protagonists and Peter Pan is the antagonist. “Misopedist” is the best word I could find, as Captain Hook starts off as somewhat of a cranky recluse who hates children due to his dark past which still gives him nightmares.

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2021-04-11T19:38:20+10:00Added an answer on April 11, 2021 at 7:38 pm

      One of those children should be his. That would personalize the story.

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        2021-04-12T00:53:31+10:00Replied to answer on April 12, 2021 at 12:53 am

        Thanks, Richiev! I thought it would be a nice spin to have Captain Hook be the “hero” and Peter Pan (and Tinkerbell) be the villain for a change. In this story, Captain Hook was actually a “Lost Boy” who barely escaped the horrors of Neverland and has lived as a secluded hermit, his lost arm, a grim reminder of the horrors he faced.

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          Richiev Singularity
          2021-04-12T15:10:18+10:00Replied to answer on April 12, 2021 at 3:10 pm

          I definitely like the premise.
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          “When his daughter is spirited away by Peter Pan, Captain Hook is forced to return to Neverland in order to rescue his daughter all while confronting the demons of his past.”
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          Or maybe it’s his son who is kidnapped since the story will involve the lost boys.

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