Unemployment
Chelsea is the first president who jointly forms the Group of Eight through circumstances of fate to reduce a disturbing factor of survival, ?Unemployment? in the New Millennium.
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Need to know the stakes.
“or else…. ” what.
What’s her obstacle. What happens if she fails. What does she personally and politically stand to lose. What does the nation stand to lose. is this her story, or the nations.
(Don’t get me wrong, your idea is probably good, just need to work on that logline.)
Sometimes certain lines can be difficult to read.
Such as: “Chelsea is the first president who jointly forms the Group of Eight”
In order to jointly do something, you have to have a partner. For-instance, if you had wrote, “Chelsea and the prime minister of France jointly form the Group of Eight” would make sense.
Also since the G-8 is already formed, this logline implies that this is an alternate history script. If this story takes place in the past then that is good, but if it takes place in the future I would consider changing the line.
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
Yes thank you very much, but i have a direction in just one or two sentences you know, never mind about the G-8, It can never be an alternate story, these characters are ordinary common citizen not even the elites.
Thank you sir, i am talking about a character who with others void an issue in the nation just basically on humanitarian and circumstances stake.
I thought she was the President of the United states?
You must be a funny writer, for you to think am referring to the president daughter, well not at all Chelsea is a man and am just my creativity okay.
I WONDER IF YOU GET THE PREMISE, CIRCUMSTANCES BROUGHT THEM ALLTOGETHER