When a mother dies of cancer, her daughter is taken care of by her father and her calculating aunt, who ends up becoming her stepmother and mistreats her harshly. The daughter discovers how to break free and kill her thanks to a book left by her mother.
(Google Translation)
cjiroPenpusher
Cuando una madre muere de c?ncer, su hija queda al cuidado de su padre y su calculadora t?a, que acaba convirti?ndose en su madrastra y la maltrata duramente. La hija descubre como liberarse y acabar con ella gracias a un libro que dej? su madre.
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Hi Cjiro,
This may well be the first logline on the site written in Spanish!
Have a read of our logline guidelines. That will help you improve your work in the future.
Perhaps you can incorporate the second sentence like this:
When she loses her mother to cancer, a girl/young woman is held captive by her father and her scheming stepmother; but when she discovers a book left by her mother, she manages?to break free and kill her captors.
I hope this helps.
Karel
Thanks for your contribution! It has helped me a lot. For my next “logline” I will try to write it in English 😀
[Ingl?s traducido al espa?ol por Google]
As? es como entiendo la historia reducida a lo b?sico:
Una joven debe aprender a usar un libro m?gico dejado por su amada pero ahora muerta madre para liberarse de su cruel padre y su t?a intrigante.
Supongo que el libro es m?gico. No s? qu? m?s podr?a proporcionar para liberarla de sus opresores.
Saludos
English:
Here is how I understand the story reduced to its basics:
A young woman must learn how to use a magical book left by her beloved but now dead mother in order to break free of her cruel father and scheming aunt.
I assume the book is magical.I do not know what else it could provide to liberate her from her oppressors.
regards