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cjiroPenpusher
Posted: February 26, 20202020-02-26T11:54:26+10:00 2020-02-26T11:54:26+10:00In: Drama

Cuando una madre muere de c?ncer, su hija queda al cuidado de su padre y su calculadora t?a, que acaba convirti?ndose en su madrastra y la maltrata duramente. La hija descubre como liberarse y acabar con ella gracias a un libro que dej? su madre.

When a mother dies of cancer, her daughter is taken care of by her father and her calculating aunt, who ends up becoming her stepmother and mistreats her harshly. The daughter discovers how to break free and kill her thanks to a book left by her mother.
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    1. dpg Singularity
      2020-02-27T10:06:11+10:00Added an answer on February 27, 2020 at 10:06 am

      [Ingl?s traducido al espa?ol por Google]

      As? es como entiendo la historia reducida a lo b?sico:

      Una joven debe aprender a usar un libro m?gico dejado por su amada pero ahora muerta madre para liberarse de su cruel padre y su t?a intrigante.

      Supongo que el libro es m?gico. No s? qu? m?s podr?a proporcionar para liberarla de sus opresores.

      Saludos

      English:

      Here is how I understand the story reduced to its basics:

      A young woman must learn how to use a magical book left by her beloved but now dead mother in order to break free of her cruel father and scheming aunt.

      I assume the book is magical.I do not know what else it could provide to liberate her from her oppressors.

      regards

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    2. cjiro Penpusher
      2020-02-26T23:11:26+10:00Added an answer on February 26, 2020 at 11:11 pm

      Thanks for your contribution! It has helped me a lot. For my next “logline” I will try to write it in English 😀

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    3. Karel Segers Samurai
      2020-02-26T12:50:43+10:00Added an answer on February 26, 2020 at 12:50 pm

      Hi Cjiro,

      This may well be the first logline on the site written in Spanish!

      Have a read of our logline guidelines. That will help you improve your work in the future.

      Perhaps you can incorporate the second sentence like this:

      When she loses her mother to cancer, a girl/young woman is held captive by her father and her scheming stepmother; but when she discovers a book left by her mother, she manages?to break free and kill her captors.

      I hope this helps.

      Karel

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