da book da moose and da foose
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finally a culmination of the book from the pagemaster, bullwinkle the moose, and chip foose have one hell of a time while the stop Dr. Evil from taking over the world once again.
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I want to respond, but I do not understand about the book from the pagemaster. Is chip foose human?
How many times has Dr. Evil taken over the world?
Is this story about the book, the pagemaster, chip foose, or Dr. Evil?
I want to respond, but I do not understand about the book from the pagemaster. Is chip foose human?
How many times has Dr. Evil taken over the world?
Is this story about the book, the pagemaster, chip foose, or Dr. Evil?
Google it all, and yes chip foose is alive and very awesome, finally its a story about the book from the pagemaster, bullwinkle the moose, and chip foose, all teaming up to get rid of doctor evil who has taken the world over 5 times before.
Google it all, and yes chip foose is alive and very awesome, finally its a story about the book from the pagemaster, bullwinkle the moose, and chip foose, all teaming up to get rid of doctor evil who has taken the world over 5 times before.
The logline seemed cryptic to me as well, if a reader needs to research the subject matter to understand the character and premise the logline is not achieving what it needs to achieve.
I can assume that these are established characters in certain places and therefore the characters and premise would be clear to people who come from these areas.
However if you want the logline to be clear to more readers, perhaps try describing the characters from the point of view of a person that is un aware of the characters origin and back story.
In most loglines names are not used unless critical to the readers understanding, generic character descriptions that are accurate to the specific story at hand are more common.
How would you describe the MC?
The antagonist is obviously Dr Evil.
How would you describe the MC goal? As in how will he or she stop Dr Evil?
I think the answers to these questions will comprise most of the next draft of the logline.
Hope this helps.
The logline seemed cryptic to me as well, if a reader needs to research the subject matter to understand the character and premise the logline is not achieving what it needs to achieve.
I can assume that these are established characters in certain places and therefore the characters and premise would be clear to people who come from these areas.
However if you want the logline to be clear to more readers, perhaps try describing the characters from the point of view of a person that is un aware of the characters origin and back story.
In most loglines names are not used unless critical to the readers understanding, generic character descriptions that are accurate to the specific story at hand are more common.
How would you describe the MC?
The antagonist is obviously Dr Evil.
How would you describe the MC goal? As in how will he or she stop Dr Evil?
I think the answers to these questions will comprise most of the next draft of the logline.
Hope this helps.