Diego, a 25 year old Argentinian who has been living illegally for the past 12 years in Luxembourg has 24 hours to leave the country.
Diego, a 25 year old Argentinian who has been living illegally for the past 12 years in Luxembourg has 24 hours to leave the country.
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sounds interesting but the inciting incident must not be cliched. too many illegal immigrant stories out there so need to make sure it doesn’t get predictable
Why?
It’s missing the inciting incident.