Samurai
Posted: 2018-03-30T03:08:32+10:00 In:

During a wedding rehearsal, a bridesmaid is taken by pirates and becomes the prize of the battle of ego vs revenge between two of the most powerful pirate ships.

During a wedding rehearsal, a bridesmaid is taken by pirates and becomes the prize of the battle of ego vs revenge between two of the most powerful pirate ships.
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    5 Reviews

    1. Logliner

      What is the protagonist of your story? the pirates? the woman? Why do pirates take the lady? She is special?

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    2. Uberwriter

      In the sequel does Johnny Depp crash the wedding?

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    3. Penpusher

      Could you fit in when it’s set? Is it now, or in the past? Could slip that information in before “most powerful” in your current logline (e.g – “two of the early 21st century’s/Jacobian era’s/whenever’s most powerful…”)

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    4. Singularity

      Who is the lead character?

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    5. Uberwriter

      Based on your premise (which sounds cool!)

      When a kidnapped bridesmaid becomes the prize in a historic feud between two almighty pirate ships, [this particular protagonist] must [reach this particular goal] or risk her forever

      (Insert your protagonist and his dramatic need)

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