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Posted: April 11, 20132013-04-11T17:21:45+10:00 2013-04-11T17:21:45+10:00In: Public

During WW2, a team of monsters led by Annabell Van Helsing must stop a group of Occult Nazis from resurrecting Dracula.

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    1. Nicholas Andrew Halls Samurai
      2013-04-11T18:59:44+10:00Added an answer on April 11, 2013 at 6:59 pm

      If there are already monsters in this universe .. who cares if they resurrect Dracula? What further threat does that pose? (What are the stakes?)
      Smells a lot like Hellboy. Just a heads up.

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    2. Tor Dollhouse
      2013-04-12T10:52:11+10:00Added an answer on April 12, 2013 at 10:52 am

      “During the Templars crusade, a team of monsters led by Annabell Van Helsing must stop a sect of satanists from summoning the 11th plague, Dracula.”

      By giving us a new time period // antagonist, this helps avoid the Hellboy cliche and can also lead to better conflict with your monster aspect. Giving Dracula a purpose also raises the stakes and makes us care for why we connect and want to see the team of monsters succeed.

      An interesting comic to check out is: Frankenstein, Agent of S.H.A.D.E.

      http://www.comicvine.com/frankenstein-agent-of-shade/4050-42793/

      Hope this helps 😀

      Tor

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