Penpusher
Posted: 2018-03-14T02:20:45+10:00 In:

E.T.A. is about a professional contract killer, who works as a flight attendant, enabling her to travel the world performing political assassinations.

E.T.A. is about a professional contract killer, who works as a flight attendant, enabling her to travel the world performing political assassinations.
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    6 Reviews

    1. Uberwriter

      a clever logic. so it’s easy for her to operate.
      still,
      all the three essential elements are missing
      The Role,
      The Goal and
      The Inciting Incident

      discuss “what forces her out of her typical” & “what’s at stake” to discover your Inciting incited
      discuss “a result of which, she must __________” to discover her Goal
      discuss “what’s her role in the scheme of the three act structure (at large)” to discover her Role

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    2. Samurai

      When the flight she is working under cover as air hostess is highjacked by terrorists, a ruthless hit woman has to choose between blowing her cover and saving the day.

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    3. Mentor

      Love the character idea especially as it has a built in click that she had to complete a hit before her next flight. If is missing a goal though.
      I like the above suggestion as we could see her taking people out while delivering peanuts.

      Maybe she is on a plane full of assassins sent to kill her and neither group wants to expose themselves so they are attempting to kill one another while the real passengers are none the wiser.

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    4. Singularity

      Agreed with Variable.

      Is this a TV series or film?

      I think this basic premise would make for a great TV series and you should seriously consider developing it for VOD streaming services.

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    5. Singularity

      This is another logline that you have written from the point of view of a narrator instead of the lead character.

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    6. Singularity

      I don’t find the premise of a flight attendant working as a professional killer to be credible.? Because if he’s any good,? he would earn more than enough money to cover travel expenses. Or have no problem billing travel expenses to the client.

      More importantly, working as a flight attendant ties him to the airline work schedule of where and when he can go; he doesn’t have the flexibility he needs to methodically plan and execute his jobs.

      However, if he was a serial killer whose idea of recreation during layovers is to engage in random acts of murder and mayhem…

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