Samurai
Posted: 2017-06-09T13:06:40+10:00 In:

Five disease research scientists are trapped in their underground laboratory by the containment system after an experimental airborne drug leaks out, only to discover it may have deadly side-effects.

Five disease research scientists are trapped in their underground laboratory by the containment system after an experimental airborne drug leaks out, only to discover it may have deadly side-effects.
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    1. Singularity

      In a story a lead character has a goal, your logline has neither a lead character or a goal. It simply presents a situation.

      1: Who is the lead character?
      2: What is their goal
      3: What is standing in the way of the lead character’s ?goal?
      4: What must the lead character do about it?

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    2. Singularity

      The redraft is better but still too wordy.

      How about:

      After a contamination lockdown traps a team of lab workers, a selfish scientist must lead them all to safety before they all succumb to the psychotic side effects of the virus.

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