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Mark Tracey
Posted: July 20, 20122012-07-20T19:08:06+10:00 2012-07-20T19:08:06+10:00In: Public

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A soldier in WW1 swaps places with his grandson in the present. The soldier has to find a way back. His grandson has to survive.

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    1. alain_alfaro
      2012-07-24T01:22:12+10:00Added an answer on July 24, 2012 at 1:22 am

      Yeah, this def sounds cool. Nice opportunity to show the “freedoms” that the grandfather fought for and the grandson is living in. Can raise an interesting conversation.

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    2. elbigelow
      2012-07-23T10:37:59+10:00Added an answer on July 23, 2012 at 10:37 am

      Cool idea. In the first line, I would use “from” instead of “in” and the last sentence is a fragment. Rewrite it if possible and you’re onto something.

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