Penpusher
Posted: 2020-10-18T14:58:01+10:00 In:

Food is scarce, tragedies are many but the fight against human extinction becomes an arduous mission for mans earliest pioneers.

Food is scarce, tragedies are many but the fight against human extinction becomes an arduous mission for mans earliest pioneers.
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    1. Singularity

      As the others have said. The logline presents a situation for a plot, but it doesn’t present a specific plot. Check out the “Formula” topic link at the top of the web page for guidelines on composing an industry acceptable logline.

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    2. Logliner

      It’s too vague. It sounds interesting. I get its post apocalyptic, but it’s missing a few elements. who is your main protagonist? Is he/she a scientist or a survivalists that no one took seriously? This will be the main character that the audience will cheering for. What is the antagonist force that will prevent him/her from accomplishing their mission. Is it a specific person or organization? Is it responsible for the near human extinction? In addition, what is their ultimate goal? The main mission. Getting to know who the character is, what their fighting against, and the goal will give a clearer picture to your story.

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    3. Singularity

      Who is the lead character?
      What do they want?
      What is standing in their way?

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