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From the depths of torture, abuse and slavery; a 90 lb. misfit conquers the United States Marine Corps bootcamp.? A story of perseverance and courage and on becoming an adult-male the USMC-way.

Title:? “from Meadowlake to Man”

Logline:?? From the depths of torture, abuse and slavery; a 90 lb. misfit conquers the United States Marine Corps bootcamp.? A story of perseverance and courage and on becoming an adult-male the USMC-way.? Based on a true story.? “Forrest Gump” meets “G.I. Jane”.? Writer: Floyd Kelly Genre: Drama

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    1. Logliner

      Good logline and potentially a satisfying story. But it can be improved.

      First off: cut the second sentence. Unnecessary.

      Next, what I would love to understand is: why? What is at stake for our hero? What does he get out of it and/or what does he have to lose?

      How is this movie going to be different from, say, the first half of FULL METAL JACKET?

      Finally: is there a Shadow character or villain we can visualise?

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