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Posted: September 30, 20182018-09-30T06:13:15+10:00 2018-09-30T06:13:15+10:00In: Student Loglines

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Two friends balance school, careers and relationships along with their partying lifestyle.

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2018-09-30T11:30:17+10:00Added an answer on September 30, 2018 at 11:30 am

      Two friends balance school, careers and relationships along with their partying lifestyle.– The End

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    2. Mike Pedley Singularity
      2018-09-30T07:36:22+10:00Added an answer on September 30, 2018 at 7:36 am

      Please read the ‘Our formula’ page.

      This doesn’t have an inciting incident, a protagonist, a goal, it sort of has stakes (although they don’t make sense – school and career… surely if they’re students they don’t have careers?)… in short, and I apologise for being blunt, no this is not a good logline.

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