Bum Builders
Idea for a six part comedy series: The worst Monday in a construction site's two week history is retold from six different perspectives to discover which one killed their foreman.
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I’d add another episode so each episode/character perspective gets equal attention and you don’t have to rush an “I know who did it!” ending in the last episode.
I’m sure you’ve noticed in shows like Columbo, Murder She Wrote and Andy Griffith’s Spooky Halloween Massacre Mystery Special, that they always pick little segments of each suspect’s story, leaving out giant chunks of backstory to cheat the viewer out of solving the mystery themselves. Which, as I’ve always seen it, is supposed to be half the fun of reading/watching good mysteries.
Just a thought.
Thanks Lucius. I’m still plotting the episodes now so will post a log line for an episode once I am happy with the story line. This I suppose would be the log line for the entire series. I’ll get to work on threading my story and produce some log lines for each episode.