The Last Dragon Keeper
In a land where the dragons have been hunted to extinction, a timid young girl learns that she is the last Dragon Keeper – and has to find a way to bring the dragons back.
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Good stuff.
My questions are:
– Why does she have to bring the dragons back? (To save… the village…. from… ?)
– Who (or what?) is the antagonist?
– What will happen if she fails?
– Why does she have to do this at this specific point in time? Is there some sort of ticking clock / urgency?
I’m assuming this is a family movie. (If it’s not, you may need to adjust the logline).
Sorry I’ve only got questions rather than answers. Hope that helps. Your concept sounds good and marketable.
How about this?
“In a mystical land a young girl must save the dragons from extinction or magic will disappear from the land forever.”
“Timid” doesn’t really express the character arc. I mean, is she only going to grow from being timid to more outs-poken or courageous? Doubt it. I’d find a better descriptor word for her. Other than that, I think it hits the mark. You can skip “has to find a way” and just jump right to the end.
Love this! Roadtested it on two guys who said my old loglines were not their kind of movie and they would both go to this movie with this logline!
Think I’d shorten it to
‘In a mystical land a young girl must save the dragons from extinction or magic will disappear forever.’
Thanks Richiev
Hmm I agree.
Yes questions have been the usual response to my loglines for this!