In A Small Town
In A Small Town is a gritty thriller following the trials and tribulations of a small town cop who has a near death event accompanied with the realization his hometown is not what it seems.
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You should be more specific, tell us what the event was… “After a near fatal car crash,” for instance
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Also, “Trials and tribulations” is vague and should be dropped.
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The line “the realization his hometown is not what it seems” gives too much away.
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I would start with the basics, what’s the cops goal or mystery he’s trying to solve and what’s standing in his way?
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
You should be more specific, tell us what the event was… “After a near fatal car crash,” for instance
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Also, “Trials and tribulations” is vague and should be dropped.
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The line “the realization his hometown is not what it seems” gives too much away.
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I would start with the basics, what’s the cops goal or mystery he’s trying to solve and what’s standing in his way?
Hope that helped, good luck with this!
Very helpful advice, thanks very much.
Very helpful advice, thanks very much.
I don’t think your logline says enough actually, as someone else said, its vague. Remember the goal of a well written logline is to prompt the reader to envision what you’ve written as a film. There has to be a protagonist, there has to be a protagonist’s goal, and there has to be something(someone) preventing the antagonist from reaching his/her goal.
I don’t think your logline says enough actually, as someone else said, its vague. Remember the goal of a well written logline is to prompt the reader to envision what you’ve written as a film. There has to be a protagonist, there has to be a protagonist’s goal, and there has to be something(someone) preventing the antagonist from reaching his/her goal.
‘trials and tribulations’ doesn’t reflect the ‘gritty’ aspect of the set-up.
‘trials and tribulations’ doesn’t reflect the ‘gritty’ aspect of the set-up.