Logliner
Posted: 2015-06-30T16:14:46+10:00 In:

In order to coordinate an extra-terrestrial landing that is expected to occur in the Australian outback, the Australian Government enlists a controversial think-tank, who are now depending on the success of this event for their own livelihood, think 'Contact' meets 'The Games' TV show.

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    3 Reviews

    1. Mentor

      Hello, the logline should be structured from the main character point of view (pick a person in the gouvernement maybe). Which country is irrelevant at this point of developement. The dimension of conflict should be clear.

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    2. Singularity

      So…who is the protagonist and what is his objective goal? Who opposes him? What are the stakes?

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    3. Singularity

      Agreed with FFF and DPG.

      Also what is the inciting incident what event starts the story and sets the MC off on their journey?

      Hope this helps.

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