A hacker must shut down the latest social media craze, The MindNet, after illegally connecting his mind with network?s creator and discovering a plan to use the MindNet as a means of population control.
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A hacker must shut down the latest social media craze, The MindNet, after illegally connecting his mind with network?s creator and discovering a plan to use the MindNet as a means of population control.
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I like the concept!
I think the?problem is that we don’t know what we will see in the movie… a physical heist at the MinNet server facility? people discussing hacking strategies on their keybords? I don’t know if this is important at this stage.
Anyway, I encourage you to write a 4 pages treatment to test the concept, then go back at the logline.
I suggest you study the Training tab up top. This logline is too long and describes far too many events for it to work well.
Here is a simplification of your concept:
The main character is a Hacker.? He or she witnesses government officials killing a new social network? technology’s inventor.? His or her goal is to shut down the new technology to save the population.
What is unclear is how the murder makes him understand that the government intends to use the new technology for the wrong reasons. Why is he so motivated to shutting down the new technology? What is his MUST do or die moment?
It’s an intriguing concept. ?And a timely one given the rapid evolution of the technology for social media and cloud services. ?Unfortunately, it’s challenging one to condense into a pithy logline.
I use a template to compose my own loglines and decompose others for analysis and polishing. ?Here’s how your logline breaks down for me:
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