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Informed his company owned synthetic body will be shut down within a week, a struggling single father must find his body’s original brain to expose the secret his company’s trying to bury.

Informed his company owned synthetic body will be shut down within a week, a struggling single father must find his body’s original brain to expose the secret his company’s trying to bury.
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    1. Singularity

      The goal and stakes are unclear.

      Why must he find the original brain?

      What is at stake if he doesn’t expose the secret?

      What does he get if he does expose it?

      And, what does expose mean? Considering how much information is pumped out online, news headlines are not a big deal at all anymore. Is there a specific authority (police, federal police, CIA) he is targeting to expose them to?

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    2. Singularity

      If the company can shut down his body and he has incriminating evidence against them, why would they warn him and why would they give him a week?

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