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Posted: 2016-03-09T12:56:07+10:00 In:

John Dillinger tangles with gunslingers and the undead in a lawless dust bowl town.

John Dillinger tangles with gunslingers and the undead in a lawless dust bowl town.
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    1. Singularity

      The logline sets up a situation, a potentially interesting one, but it fails to delineate an objective goal? that indicates? the particular trajectory of?the plot.??To wit, what must?John Dillinger do besides “tangle”?

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    2. Singularity

      Agreed with DPG.

      Also the logline describes two potential antagonists the undead and a gunslinger, but which one will cause the most conflict and to that matter provide the last obstacle in act 3? That’s the only one that should be in the logline.

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