Penpusher
Posted: 2013-06-03T17:24:24+10:00 In:

?Just 3D-digitized, two famous Toon-actors are sent against their will on the internet to spread an elusive virus and must prevent ?Villains? of leading the world into a backward of forty years.?

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    1. The word ‘despite’, should that be ‘disguise’ or just what it is? if it is despite, the logline needs to be revisited. It is a good logline to make a good compelling story.

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    2. Penpusher

      Hi pastorim,

      Thank you.

      I grade it

      I found ‘despite himself’ on http://www.wordreference.com/fren/malgr%C3%A9

      I mean ‘against their will’ or ‘in spite of themselves’

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    3. Penpusher

      >> It is a good logline to make a good compelling story

      You can find details about this story on my previous post:

      “Just 3D-digitized, two famous Toon-actors of the forties must struggle to foil the Villains who want to make them spread an elusive virus which threaten the worldwide networks. ” (May 30)

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    4. Singularity

      Hackers “kidnap” and infect famous cartoon characters, now deployed as wildly popular phone apps, with a lethal virus that will bring down the Internet unless their ransom demands are met.

      Still awkward, but closer, methinks, to the current state of Internet technology and marketplace.

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    5. Penpusher

      Thank you dpg,

      I crush my mind with this and I rewrite.

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