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Posted: December 29, 20132013-12-29T10:56:46+10:00 2013-12-29T10:56:46+10:00In: Public

Lonely woman recognizes on a blind date one of her torturers from ten years ago. After the memories of her horror come back, she decides to take revenge and find the rest of them.

Blind Date

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    1. Adele93
      2014-01-06T05:24:09+10:00Added an answer on January 6, 2014 at 5:24 am

      I really like the idea! If this film was at the movies, I would definitely go and see it.

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    2. screen&writing
      2013-12-31T08:04:11+10:00Added an answer on December 31, 2013 at 8:04 am

      Thank you guys. Now I see two things:
      first ? my first version was too flat. Your dpg, has more power and is stronger.
      second ? it is important to (and I forgot about this) describe a personal conflict ? in this case “pastor’s wife” is enough to see a lot of hard situations for her and this is a great driver for whole story.
      Thx. again.

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    3. 2013-12-30T10:19:08+10:00Added an answer on December 30, 2013 at 10:19 am

      …..Replace “kill” with “execute”
      Now, that’s COLD!

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    4. JayK Penpusher
      2013-12-30T08:00:53+10:00Added an answer on December 30, 2013 at 8:00 am

      Yes! Especially the empowerment implicit in the concept of “best therapy”!
      Hell hath no fury like a woman gang raped.
      Feed on the rage!

      I would make it more transformational by making her meek and mousy, and morally ambiguous by making her the spurned wife of a pastor.

      Try this?…

      “Still suffering from acute trauma ten years after a brutal gang rape, a spurned, mousy, submissive pastor’s wife decides that her best therapy and chance at marital redemption is to stalk and kill her attackers one by one.”

      (Gives me chills!)

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    5. dpg Singularity
      2013-12-30T04:54:37+10:00Added an answer on December 30, 2013 at 4:54 am

      Still suffering from acute Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder 10 years after a brutal gang rape, a woman decides that the best therapy is to hunt down and kill her attackers.

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