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Mike PedleySingularity
Posted: December 19, 20192019-12-19T19:51:06+10:00 2019-12-19T19:51:06+10:00In: Heist

Los Angeles, 1988: When his estranged daughter needs money for drama school, an ex-master criminal turned stuntman plans an elaborate heist during the filming of an elaborate heist movie known as ?Die Hard?.

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2019-12-20T03:10:39+10:00Added an answer on December 20, 2019 at 3:10 am

      “When his wife needs expensive experimental cancer treatment, a stuntman with a criminal past attempts to carry out an elaborate heist while filming the classic movie, Dire Hard”

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    2. Scott Danzig Samurai
      2019-12-20T06:26:15+10:00Added an answer on December 20, 2019 at 6:26 am

      The main thing I don’t understand is, why would such a criminal be unlucky?? I feel it’s supposed to be apparent to us from the logline, which would be great as a hook, but it’s not.? I’d think, if there was another distracting elaborate heist, you might have an easier time pulling yours off, because it could be a nice distraction, and you might even get access to places you wouldn’t, pretending to be a production assistant or catering and walkin’ like you own it.

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    3. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2019-12-21T09:41:38+10:00Added an answer on December 21, 2019 at 9:41 am

      As Richiev’s example demonstrates, to help with empathy, you’ll need an out of the ordinary event to motivate him and a noble goal. Otherwise, he’s just a thief doing his thing, which in its own right isn’t very interesting.

       

       

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    4. Lanko98 Penpusher
      2019-12-22T02:07:31+10:00Added an answer on December 22, 2019 at 2:07 am

      The word (unlucky) gives me feeling it’s a comedy

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