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TOAST
Posted: November 8, 20122012-11-08T16:21:17+10:00 2012-11-08T16:21:17+10:00In: Public

Mick is placed in charge of security USB key containing a top secret list of field agents… which gets accidentally eaten by his Scottish Terrier, McCloud. )

CyberOpsAU – Episode 2 – Uploaded to the Cloud

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    1. TOAST
      2012-11-08T16:23:37+10:00Added an answer on November 8, 2012 at 4:23 pm

      Part of a TV Series. The logline for the series itself is at:
      https://loglines.org/the-b-team-at-australias-cyber-security-operations-centre-are-a-mix-of-nerds-screw-ups-and-outcasts-they-are-tasked-with-protecting-the-nation-from-cyber-crime-and-foreign-espionage/

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2012-11-08T17:50:47+10:00Added an answer on November 8, 2012 at 5:50 pm

      You are missing the… “And now he must” part of the logline.

      When a promotion hungry agent’s Scottish Terrier eats a USB key that holds national secrets, the agent must now… (Do this) … (or else this will happen)

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    3. TOAST
      2012-11-08T18:21:31+10:00Added an answer on November 8, 2012 at 6:21 pm

      Damn, you’re completely right. My current outline has the actual stakes/consequences as pretty weak. I think I need to amp it up a bit.

      Hey, this process really works 🙂

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    4. Kriss Tolliday
      2012-11-08T19:43:18+10:00Added an answer on November 8, 2012 at 7:43 pm

      Is it a kind of spoof/satirical tv programme? When started reading it I thought not this story line again but the spin at the end was funny and I liked it. Richiev is right it does need the what does he do next but it is a funny spin on an overdone premise.

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    5. TOAST
      2012-11-08T20:32:03+10:00Added an answer on November 8, 2012 at 8:32 pm

      Thanks for the comment Kriss. Yup, it’s a sitcom, mostly farce.

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