Crumbling Beauty, Jacob, and Joseph, are standing on the front
lawn. Crumbling Beauty is armed with a shovel, bucket, and a
wheelbarrow. Jacob and Joseph have handguns. Underneath them,
directly below, underground, inside a small burrow, can be seen
two small moles.
Alan SmitheePenpusher
Moles. Eat Worms.
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I don’t get it. Sorry! It seems a bit nonsensical to me. What am I missing?
Um, same here. It’s more of an action line in the script than a logline.
Thanks for your insight. I can see now. I’m must play by the rules…
Yup, it’s a forum for loglines 🙂
Way out there… with no connection to the audience.
If you want to create a film people would like to watch, you need to give them a good reason to watch.
If it’s for your viewing only…. you don’t need a logline.