Trapped in a small rural town cut off by bushfire closing in, an ex-convict biker accompanied by his blind mother has to protect her and himself against rage of local Christian sect members forced to give them shelter by authorities. Amidst inferno of destroyed houses, livestock, and crops, he has to fight for survival facing hatred and love of two men from the sect – his estranged father, its supreme leader, who he was searching for his whole life not knowing his dad hid his birth as a dirty secret, and his twin brother he never knew existed.
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It’s an interesting concept and I can see you have a good idea on what you want your screenplay to be about. However, the length can be shortened and you have some unnecessary details that you don’t have to squeeze in there. Also, I’m looking at it and can’t seem to figure out your main goal for your protagonist. Is it to protect himself and his mother or face the issue head on?
When a massive fire forces him and his mother to seek shelter in a small town, an ex-convict must… (Then tell us what he must do. Escape? Kill his father? Get to the authorities?)