Samurai
Posted: 2017-01-22T06:28:24+10:00 In:

On the outskirts of a small town, a bewildered woman is pushed to the breaking point when she escapes her overbearing husband by luring him into the woods. Short Story, 6pg.

On the outskirts of a small town, a bewildered woman is pushed to the breaking point when she escapes her overbearing husband by luring him into the woods. Short Story, 6pg.
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    1. Singularity

      I don’t think you need, “Pushed to the breaking point” if you have set it up correct we will know that without you telling us.

      Even though it is a short I would still add a goal for the woman now that she is in the woods. (Unless the story is about her getting to the woods)

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