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Alex_212
Posted: April 15, 20132013-04-15T13:40:19+10:00 2013-04-15T13:40:19+10:00In: Public

A dysfunctional Aussie neighborhood where a lovable though politically incorrect Ernie, battles daily to accept the fact that he is no longer young.

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    1. dpg Singularity
      2013-04-16T07:26:41+10:00Added an answer on April 16, 2013 at 7:26 am

      “Accept the fact that he is no longer young” is a subjective need — but not an objective goal. Why does he need to face reality? What’s at stake — to be gained if he matures, to be lost if he doesn’t?

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    2. Tor Dollhouse
      2013-04-15T15:41:21+10:00Added an answer on April 15, 2013 at 3:41 pm

      This sounds more character than plot.

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      Why is it affecting him now ??
      What is the incident that has triggered this.

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      What is Ernie battling for to overcome his flaw ??

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      What is he risking to not be seen as old ??

      Hope this helps 😀

      Tor

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