Over a psychotherapy session, a man with failing marriage and too much history starts falling in love with his female therapist and must be stopped or she’d lose her license

‘Too much history’ – it is unclear. In my first Logline? I was pointed out about the unclear plot. I think that this gets in that category. You can make the log-line without mentioning about history, as it is going to be the character’s journey in the script.

The event of losing the license will only occur if Therapist too falls in love. Assuming that it will happen, you must try to mention it in your log-line.

For E.g., If you start your script with your main character’s voice over who is describing his fondness towards the therapist and again comparing her with his ex-wife, it will set up your premise. That’s it. But other than that the above log-line won’t get you to the resolution part.

If your character’s story has to revolve around the therapist you must mention her qualities, like an adjective describing her (in the log-line).

You can also describe his ex wife through an adjective.

Try to get the main goal of the character in the log-line. Figure out the goal that sets your story’s dramatic premise. Good Luck.