People spend too much time living and working for the system and forget about themselves and their dreams. Follow Your Dreams!

I think your lines do not perfectly fit the structure of an intriguing logline. It’s more like an opinion rather than a logline. There is no mention of any protagonist and his motive or any hint of the situation to create any curiosity.

Example: Boarded and tired of his routine job, a young software engineer accidentally discovers his true calling and embarks on an adventure of his lifetime.