logline: “an insomniac girl falls in an unlikely friendship with the reluctant night watchman only to discover he is a vampire”
hey you know, you should get out, enjoy the sun…
…Oh wait, you can’t
(from Book “By the Light of the Moon”)
..so the goal i had in mind for them was to adjust their lives for the sake of one other, like:
For him to convince his bloodsucking family to back off. For her to convince her family to stop their demands to meet the boy.
I am confused who is the protagonist
I am confused of the film category (on the whole spectrum of rom-com, more romance or comedy)
Also, can somebody suggest a unique goal (this one sounds like twilight series)
Thanks
It’ s an interesting idea, but as Richiev notes,? it needs a clear conflict.? What dramatic problem is created by this situation?? What conflict, what struggle ensues as a result of the relationship?
And as Brandon8719 asked, what is the hook that differentiates this from the “Twilight” series with which it will be immediately compared?
You haven’t given us any clear conflict, adding that to the logline will help improve it.
The big question is: what does she have to do once she finds out he’s a vampire? Does the movie end there? I hope not. And why will it matter and for what after that?
At least her insomnia should help in the relationship, I would think.