logline: “an arranged-marriage-averse-indian falls in love with his parent’s recent proposal only to discover that the girl wants him to help her elope with her (apparent) soulmate”
plot dynamics could be:
boy falls in love
girl decides to meet him on a date
girl reveals her own hatred for arranged marriage-she is in a relationship which her parents would never agree to*(an intercaste marriage is typically infamous in India…..google “honor killing”)
boy is heartbroken
boy and girl form an unlikely friendship
gradually boy helps her elope with her forbidden love
instead-through the film-all his efforts for her happiness makes the girl realise of his love for her
the girl decides to marry him instead
the logline is sloppy with 30 words
Also I cannot seem to find a suitable film title
As written, the woman in your story seems to have the goal, the lead character seems to be swept up into her story.
That can work, but only if the lead has a compelling goal as well.