Pregnant, with a two year old, unfamiliar with her husband?s home country, a horrific accident changes everything, he survives with no memory of where he is and the new life he has started to build in Australia, she quickly becomes his only thread in his new country full of strangers and strange ways.
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Pregnant, with a two year old, unfamiliar with her husband?s home country, a horrific accident changes everything, he survives with no memory of where he is and the new life he has started to build in Australia, she quickly becomes his only thread in his new country full of strangers and strange ways.
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Thank you Nir Shelter and thank you Richiev.
There are many comments to be made about this logline — too many — I suggest you check out the ‘Formula’ tab up top and re draft this accordingly.
A few starting points:
Use one description for the main character, preferably a character flaw.
Identify the main goal that the main character will pursue and describe it.
Identify the major obstacle standing in the way of the MC and describe it.
In a story the inciting incident leads to a goal
After her husbands horrific accident a housewife unfamiliar with Australia?must…
Now we need a goal for the lead character.