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JanPenpusher
Posted: February 19, 20222022-02-19T12:00:25+10:00 2022-02-19T12:00:25+10:00In: Fantasy

Reincarnated as a baby who kept his memory into the world of sword and magic, former shut-in mid age scientist sets on a mission to live a meaningful life, only to find out that his former boss who caused the accident and killed them both has been reincarnated aswell and is set on repeating the planet threatening experiment again. (Epic fantasy book novel)

Reincarnated as a baby who kept his memory into the world of sword and magic, former shut-in mid age scientist sets on a mission to live a meaningful life, only to find out that his former boss who caused the accident and killed them both has been reincarnated aswell and is set on repeating the planet threatening experiment again. (Epic fantasy book novel)
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    1. Rutger Oosterhoff Logliner
      2022-03-12T20:48:58+10:00Added an answer on March 12, 2022 at 8:48 pm

      Trying to shorten it futher. “After his boss kills them both, a former shut-in scientist reincarnated with his memories in a sword and magic world, must stop his menace finding a way to repeat the deadly experiment that could destroy the world.”

      Problem is that you still use the word “world “twice, and I can’t change the second “world” into Earth, because I don’t kow if wer’re talking Earth.Sure, I could end with the word “planet”, but destroying a world=society/societies is different from destroying the whole planet.

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2022-02-19T19:46:04+10:00Added an answer on February 19, 2022 at 7:46 pm

      “After his boss kills them both, a former shut-in scientist is reincarnated with his memories in a sword and magic world but must stop his former boss from finding a way to repeat the deadly experiment that could destroy the world.”

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      • Jan Penpusher
        2022-02-19T20:20:57+10:00Replied to answer on February 19, 2022 at 8:20 pm

        Perfect! Thanx Richiev

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