REVISION // When zombies slaughter their classmates and the teacher drives off with the bus, a shy film geek must unite the survivors and use all his movie knowledge to keep everyone alive until help arrives.
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REVISION // When zombies slaughter their classmates and the teacher drives off with the bus, a shy film geek must unite the survivors and use all his movie knowledge to keep everyone alive until help arrives.
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Your last version-although wordy-was clearer, maybe how he MUST “unite his comrades..” is a bit extraneous. Other than that, it rocks.
Good Luck mikepedley85!!
“When zombies attack during his school field trip, A film buff must use his horror film knowledge if he is to defeat the horde and lead his class to safety.”
The premise is that these zombies will behave exactly like the zombies in the most famous zombie movies so that he is able to perfectly predict it? So you’re saying… this will be predictable? You’ve shot yourself in the foot a little bit. You’ve told me to expect nothing new.