"SOMETIMES LOVE" A man with little direction, falls in love with the woman who saves his life, but they have to overcome her drug addiction and past horrors in order to survive.

Nothing wrong with my script, it’s just the way I’m wording my logline, and it has been rewritten from scratch because my Protagonist did not have a goal, and my structure was not the best. That has all been fixed, and all though the logline is important, you can give me an Oscar winning script, and I still won’t do the logline justice…. So by saying that… I need work on the proper way of constructing a logline. I agree to certain extent about the logline should come before the script, and your ending should be first… and all else… but sometimes it is what it is, and I’m not going to let this logline dictate if should start from scratch on my script…. So, I will get this logline down to have a better visual of my screenplay… And thanks for all the advice, I truly appreciate it, and hopefully I can improve this logline because it’s evident I’m leaving off something, or not focusing on… who knows… 🙂

I called myself trying to enhance the logline that was provided to me by Screenplayreaders.com (in November), but it sounds like I didn’t do a good job. “A couple falls in love but have to overcome the woman?s drug addiction and past horrors in order to survive.” My screenplay has changed a lot since that review, but their logline still is sufficient to the story. Before Screenplayreaders review/logline, my story did not have a premise, nor was it structured properly… I guess I will keep at it.