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marliebear@outlook.comPenpusher
Posted: August 15, 20232023-08-15T01:16:02+10:00 2023-08-15T01:16:02+10:00In: Comedy

Spiralling amidst a divorce and losing custody of his daughter, a man takes a dangerous job shutting down an oil refinery with a band of salt-of-the-Earth co-workers.

Spiralling amidst a divorce and losing custody of his daughter, a man takes a dangerous job shutting down an oil refinery with a band of salt-of-the-Earth co-workers.
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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2023-08-18T18:26:04+10:00Added an answer on August 18, 2023 at 6:26 pm

      You should make the goal more clear in the logline. (Not too big of a criticism)

      Also, the logline itself does not give off an ‘Old School vibe. So you might want to add something that implies comedy in the logline.

      Perhaps, instead of salt-of-the-earth, you could describe the ragtag group of refinery workers as oddball or quirky.

      However, think minor changes, I believe the logline itself is almost there.

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    2. marliebear@outlook.com Penpusher
      2023-08-15T01:17:38+10:00Added an answer on August 15, 2023 at 1:17 am

      SHUTDOWN

      Comps: OLD SCHOOL meets DEEP WATER HORIZON

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