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pat21532
Posted: August 15, 20132013-08-15T03:09:18+10:00 2013-08-15T03:09:18+10:00In: Public

Spoiled rich girl spends to much on her daddy's credit card and is forced to get a job to pay off the debt. While working she falls in love with a coworker who shows her the value of a dollar.

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    1. kitty
      2013-08-23T03:23:07+10:00Added an answer on August 23, 2013 at 3:23 am

      This is my first time to review – so keep that in mind! The story might be interesting, but all I think of when I read the logline is some of the goofy sitcoms on now and they’re so shallow with predictable plots, etc.

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    2. Trenterprise
      2013-08-23T01:25:03+10:00Added an answer on August 23, 2013 at 1:25 am

      This premise seems to be on a bit of the bland side and uses a bunch of cliches (e.g., young girl following in love with coworker, young girl spending too much of “daddy’s money”, spoiled-to-thankful reverse hero storyline). Also, the movie “Confessions of a Shopaholic” already exists.

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