Take a look into the life of ?Dog? & ?Bird?. Two roommates who work for Cathedral Nightclub as Promoters in the city of Las Viami.
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Take a look into the life of ?Dog? & ?Bird?. Two roommates who work for Cathedral Nightclub as Promoters in the city of Las Viami.
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“…Take a look into the life of ?Dog? & ?Bird?. Two roommates who work for Cathedral Nightclub as Promoters in the city of Las Viami…”
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The primary function of a logline is to describe a plot, check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar for more information on logline structure and conventions.
Here are a few quesiotns to get you started:
Who is the main character?
What event motivates him or her to take action?
What is the main character’s goal?
A logline is a short synopsis of your story in as few a words as possible.
You have described a setting but not much else.
A story involves?a lead character, who has a goal, and something that stands in the way of that goal.
Also, there is usually some event which takes the character out of their normal routine?and set the story in motion.
Hello Cejjones1989! Welcome to logline.it
A simple format to start off —
(while working for a Nightclub as Promoters) two roommates face [this inciting incident] and must [reach this goal] (..or else risk [these stakes]..)
Conflict must be implied. That’s what makes the goal more crisp and reasonable. Feel free to browse through other loglines. Good luck!
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