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Posted: 2018-05-24T12:40:30+10:00 In:

Take a look into the life of ?Dog? & ?Bird?. Two roommates who work for Cathedral Nightclub as Promoters in the city of Las Viami.

Take a look into the life of ?Dog? & ?Bird?. Two roommates who work for Cathedral Nightclub as Promoters in the city of Las Viami.
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    4 Reviews

    1. Samurai

      This is nothing. You’ve told us nothing.

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    2. Uberwriter

      Hello Cejjones1989! Welcome to logline.it

      A simple format to start off —
      (while working for a Nightclub as Promoters) two roommates face [this inciting incident] and must [reach this goal] (..or else risk [these stakes]..)

      Conflict must be implied. That’s what makes the goal more crisp and reasonable. Feel free to browse through other loglines. Good luck!

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    3. Singularity

      A logline is a short synopsis of your story in as few a words as possible.
      You have described a setting but not much else.

      A story involves?a lead character, who has a goal, and something that stands in the way of that goal.
      Also, there is usually some event which takes the character out of their normal routine?and set the story in motion.

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    4. Singularity

      “…Take a look into the life of ?Dog? & ?Bird?. Two roommates who work for Cathedral Nightclub as Promoters in the city of Las Viami…”

      Is this a friendly suggestion or a logline…?

      The primary function of a logline is to describe a plot, check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar for more information on logline structure and conventions.

      Here are a few quesiotns to get you started:

      Who is the main character?

      What event motivates him or her to take action?

      What is the main character’s goal?

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