Posted: 2013-06-13T05:02:35+10:00 In:

The attempted assassination of a bright young politician sends his devoted wife down a reckless path toward the one man who can save him ? but whose unethical treatment leaves the patient with a murderous appetite.

Terminal Condition (redux!)

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    1. The first line is fine to grab attention. Get rid of the rest of it,’ but whose unethical treatment leaves the patient with a murderous appetite’.

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    2. Singularity

      “Murderous appetite” — what does that mean? The ‘cure’ leaves patients with an insatiable appetite for killing people? Turns them into cannibals? This phrase (still) confuses and mystifies rather than hooks my interest.

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    3. This version of the logline reflects the further development of the main characters, and IMO) is different enough from the original to warrant reposting. If it’s not, I apologize in advance. As always, your feedback is much appreciated.

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