The chance to bring to light a stealth Claimant to the Camelot Mantle is the media equivalent of the Holy Grail. Here is a tale of a woman raised in obscurity , in ignorance of her true origins. Living for years in the distant Provinces who has suddenly discovered her roots. More interesting, the Secret had been kept from her for over 50 years. Where the dark heart of conspiracy takes on a whole new meaning. This is the Zodiac speaking.
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The chance to bring to light a stealth Claimant to the Camelot Mantle is the media equivalent of the Holy Grail. Here is a tale of a woman raised in obscurity , in ignorance of her true origins. Living for years in the distant Provinces who has suddenly discovered her roots. More interesting, the Secret had been kept from her for over 50 years. Where the dark heart of conspiracy takes on a whole new meaning. This is the Zodiac speaking.
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Okay I?m doing a lot of guessing here:
A woman discovers she?s the spawn of the infamous Zodiac Killerand must fight against the dark forces after her and her small child.
I really have no idea what she?s fighting against so just said ?dark forces? as a placeholder since this is a horror.
LIke Richiev I have no idea what the story is about.? And I am familiar with the case of the Bay Area Zodiac killer.
Of course, a logline? shouldn’t describe the plot in detail and should never give away a Big Reveal or the ending. But it must succinctly answer 3 basic question as explained in? “Our Formula”:
1]What is the inciting incident that sets the plot in motion?
2] Who is the protagonist and? what is her role?
3} What is the protagonist’s specific objective goal? What is she struggling to achieve or acquire?
1.) Discovering her roots. Who she really is. Uncovering the truth.
2.)To hide a child and how she came about
3.) The 16 year old Mother that the Zodiac killer (In his late 50’s)got pregnant. ALL the people who knew of this child’s birth & ?her existence had to go…
This is a true story. You’re not suppose to know ALOT of what you ask. There’s more then just one main character. There’s basically 2.
After reading this, I still don’t know what the story is about.
What sets the story in motion?
What is the goal of the lead character?
What is standing in the lead characters way?