Dark Empire
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The dying emperor of a crumbling galactic empire struggles to hold onto power amidst political intrigue and a coming war.
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I do get a sense of stetting and a hint of story from this logline, However It would be good if you told us what he was struggling against. His ambition son? A longtime rival? A galactic insurgency?
Still I really like the idea, good luck with this!
Like Star Wars but from the emperors view !! I LOVE IT
The only suggestion would be to try and be more specific with the struggle as Richiev mentioned..
Happy writing 😀
Tor
Like Star Wars BUT from the Emperors point of view!! I LOVE IT
Your logline just identify the setting – the situation on the beginning and what’s at stakes. But it does not tell a story. Identify an antagonist (not necessarily a person), but there is that missing “so he must – “
I will re-post based on the commentaries