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Alan SmitheePenpusher
Posted: November 12, 20152015-11-12T06:14:55+10:00 2015-11-12T06:14:55+10:00In: Adventure

The gods an Irish programmer?s been praying to are real, and they have a task – find weapons from ancient Celtic myth or watch the human race be eradicated by a legion of dead tyrants.

The gods an Irish programmer?s been praying to are real, and they have a task – find weapons from ancient Celtic myth or watch the human race be eradicated by a legion of dead tyrants.
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    1. dpg Singularity
      2015-11-12T08:34:28+10:00Added an answer on November 12, 2015 at 8:34 am

      I’m confused. Who is the protagonist, the ‘gods’ or the programmer? ( And if the ‘gods’ which one in particular?? And why do they need a mere mortal, the programmer?? Why can’t they do the job themselves?)

      IOW:? who is in the driver’s seat of the story?? Who specifically wants to get their hands on the weapons — the programmer or the gods?

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    2. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2015-11-12T08:50:54+10:00Added an answer on November 12, 2015 at 8:50 am

      I think the implication is for the programmer to be the main character, if this is the case, then his goal is to save the human race.

      I think best to restructure the logline to reflect this and eliminate the basic logic flaw DPG raised:
      E.g:
      After a legion of the un dead head to Earth a programmer seeks the help of a long forgotten god to save the human race.

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    3. FFF Mentor
      2015-11-12T19:42:59+10:00Added an answer on November 12, 2015 at 7:42 pm

      Hello,
      why a programmer??I suggest to make clear why a programmer would be the most interesting character for this movie, or to ask yourself who would be the most interesting character for THIS?movie.

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