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Posted: 2020-02-08T02:33:35+10:00 In:

The Great-Great-Grand-Niece of Chief Crazy Horse and her drinking buddy born twelve-light-years away must somehow together prevent the earth from being reduced to a burnt-out cinder.

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    3 Reviews

    1. Uberwriter

      Great setup.

      Why and How and What makes it so hard?

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    2. Singularity

      Is there some importance to the lead character being the Great-Great-Grand-Niece of Chief Crazy Horse? You have set up, but no delivery. (And why grand niece and not granddaughter?) For instance, if she has special shaman abilities she got from her lineage, then I would understand it better.

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    3. Singularity

      What’s the nature of the threat will reduce the earth to a burnt out cinder?

      >>>The Great-Great-Grand-Niece of Chief Crazy Horse?

      So what?

      By that I mean how does that? make her The One to save humanity?? In a logline, the protagonist should be defined in terms of either a strength that uniquely qualifies her to solve the dramatic problem; or she should be defined in terms of a flaw that threatens to undermine her ability to solve the dramatic problem.? I don’t see how her lineage qualifies her for either. Her lineage, while interesting, seems extraneous to the plot.

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