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pickerman123Penpusher
Posted: July 22, 20222022-07-22T23:22:00+10:00 2022-07-22T23:22:00+10:00In: Comedy

THE INCREDIBLY, ALMOST MADE UP TRUE STORY OF THORTON T. THORTON The wealthy owner of a television network creates a show so offensive it results in a global backlash by America and its allies who will do anything to prevent the airing of the network’s lastest sitcom– which takes place in a Nazi concentration camp.

This is a completed screenplay (link below) in the vein of Stanley kubricks dark comedy “DR. Strangelove”.

https://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/AMAZINGTRUESTORY.pdf

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    1. pickerman123 Penpusher
      2022-07-28T10:30:01+10:00Added an answer on July 28, 2022 at 10:30 am

      Hey guys:

      Just revised today 7/27 based on your suggestions which really helped. thanks!

      Rich

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    2. Busfender Penpusher
      2022-07-26T03:15:17+10:00Added an answer on July 26, 2022 at 3:15 am

      What is the so what of the most offensive programming?

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      • pickerman123 Penpusher
        2022-07-27T01:20:49+10:00Replied to answer on July 27, 2022 at 1:20 am

        thansnk for the suggetions. I’ve revised it. APpreciate you thoughts.

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    3. Richiev Singularity
      2022-07-25T21:57:32+10:00Added an answer on July 25, 2022 at 9:57 pm

      You haven’t told us what is standing in the way.
      Who is the face of the opposition.?
      Who is the face of those offended?
      If he owns the network, why does he care?

      You have only set up a situation. A man buys a network and creates offensive programming…
      How does this situation create dramatic tension?
      If he owns the network he can do what he wants… unless (This specific thing stands in the way)

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      • Richiev Singularity
        2022-07-25T22:00:06+10:00Replied to answer on July 25, 2022 at 10:00 pm

        I hate that, not only can I not edit my posts, I can’t erase it there is a double post! Writing is re-writing but on logline it, we are not able to do that. Editing is a writer’s biggest tool.

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    4. Richiev Singularity
      2022-07-25T21:56:56+10:00Added an answer on July 25, 2022 at 9:56 pm

      You haven’t told us what is standing in the way.
      Who is the face of the opposition.?
      Who is the face of those offended?
      If he owns the network, why does he care?

      You have only set up a situation. A man buys a network and creates offensive programming…
      How does this situation create dramatic tension?
      If he owns the network he can do what he wants… unless (This specific thing stands in the way)

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      • pickerman123 Penpusher
        2022-07-27T01:20:10+10:00Replied to answer on July 27, 2022 at 1:20 am

        thansnk for the suggetions. I’ve revised it. APpreciate you thoughts.

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    5. BenGilani Logliner
      2022-07-23T19:13:31+10:00Added an answer on July 23, 2022 at 7:13 pm

      Hi pickerman123,
      How about:
      A deep delve into THORTON T’s television network and its most offensive tv show.

      I hope this helps

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        2022-07-27T01:20:28+10:00Replied to answer on July 27, 2022 at 1:20 am

        thansnk for the suggetions. I’ve revised it. APpreciate you thoughts.

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