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JBalmerPenpusher
Posted: July 2, 20132013-07-02T04:39:37+10:00 2013-07-02T04:39:37+10:00In: Public

The schizoid daughter of America?s most prolific serial killer, must assist the FBI in catching the man who has begun reenacting her father?s murders.

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    1. Hillary Corby
      2013-07-04T06:39:39+10:00Added an answer on July 4, 2013 at 6:39 am

      Story idea sounds really cool.

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2013-07-03T07:27:38+10:00Added an answer on July 3, 2013 at 7:27 am

      >>> Or would that be too much going on?

      My motto is: “The road of excess leads to the palatial mansion on Malibu Beach.” — Will Blake

      Both disorders (APD and BPD) can be the basis for complex, compelling characters. You’re call and best wishes with your idea.

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    3. JBalmer Penpusher
      2013-07-03T07:09:55+10:00Added an answer on July 3, 2013 at 7:09 am

      In order to find relief from her own demons, the mentally disturbed daughter of an infamous serial killer aids the FBI in catching the person who is copycatting her father?s sadistic methods.

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    4. JBalmer Penpusher
      2013-07-03T06:41:08+10:00Added an answer on July 3, 2013 at 6:41 am

      Some people have avoidant-borderline mixed personality. Or would that be too much going on? So far in the summary she helped her father lure his victims. He was trying to training her to be his apprentice. So maybe she realized what he was doing was wrong and she tried to tell her mom. No one believed her so the dad had her committed to an asylum as punishment. She gets out and finds out about the copycat, thinking that it might be her dad’s new apprentice, she agrees to help the FBI catch the guy.

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    5. dpg Singularity
      2013-07-02T08:39:49+10:00Added an answer on July 2, 2013 at 8:39 am

      More randomized thoughts:

      >>>The coldness, detachment, the apathy related to it will make it interesting

      1] Have you checked out borderline personality disorder (BPD)? If you want “interesting”, BPD is the disorder of choice.

      2] Whatever you choose, one complication could be that she goes on and off her medications. (Which the mentally afflicted often do because they don’t like the side affects. Or because they are indigent — can’t afford the meds on a regular basis. ) And when she’s off her meds, she’s bouncing off the walls, acting out her symptoms in extremis.

      3] For those into Jungian/Campell archetypology, she could be a combo: hero + trickster. She’s the only friend she’s got — and her own worst enemy.

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    6. dpg Singularity
      2013-07-02T08:12:26+10:00Added an answer on July 2, 2013 at 8:12 am

      Randomized thought:

      Possible motivation:
      The demon she is wrestling with: Nobody believed her years ago when she said her father was a serial killer. She was a young girl, already exhibiting mental illness — who was going to believe her? Not her mother who was in denial about her husband, who conspired with her husband to have her institutionalized.

      This time, dammit, she’s going to make them believe her. Or die trying.

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    7. dpg Singularity
      2013-07-02T07:27:12+10:00Added an answer on July 2, 2013 at 7:27 am

      Well….

      In order to find relief from her own demons, the schizoaffective daughter of a notorious serial killer helps the FBI to catch another serial killer who is copy-catting her father?s sadistic methods.

      Problems/issues:

      You have to assume no one is going to know what “schizoaffective” means. They are going to confuse it with schizophrenia. Or any other clinical term. So, I’m tempted to suggest “mentally disturbed”.

      ‘another serial killer’

      I selected that phrase because how do they know it’s a man? Could it be a woman? (In terms of crime data, the very long odds are that it’s a man. But if you can construct a credible final twist/reveal that it’s a woman, that’s a definite plus factor in the plot to my demented way of thinking.)

      ‘find relief from her own demons’

      In real life (as opposed to reel life)–not likely. Gone are the days when films purvey the Freudian notion that ghosts of past trauma can be exorcised by talking or some other therapeutic method. So WHY she gets involved — what her final subjective goal is — may need some thought.

      But it is credible that she could be lucid enough to realize from, say, watching news stories on the TV that a serial killer is copy-catting her father’s m.o. — realizes it before the FBI does.

      And, of course, if you go with that angle, they don’t believe her at first — she’s a “nut case” after all.

      Potential:

      On the basis of what I have read and observed of psychological disorders and psychopathology, I think it’s an interesting premise to make the protagonist a person afflicted with a mental illness.

      But it’s a challenging one. Best wishes with your concept.

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    8. JBalmer Penpusher
      2013-07-02T05:33:55+10:00Added an answer on July 2, 2013 at 5:33 am

      She is the protagonist. Maybe she isn’t schizoid in the traditional sense. Maybe she can feel a tinge of remorse for the role she played in the death’s of her father’s victims. Maybe she helps the FBI agent because she thinks it will cure her of this feeling.

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    9. JBalmer Penpusher
      2013-07-02T05:12:30+10:00Added an answer on July 2, 2013 at 5:12 am

      I’ve done the research. It’s not just the social aspect of the disorder, that attracts me to it. The coldness, detachment, the apathy related to it will make it interesting. Being an FBI agent or having any job of service requires a person to genuinely care about the wellbeing of others. She doesn’t care, but she is being asked to for the sake of others.

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    10. dpg Singularity
      2013-07-02T05:06:47+10:00Added an answer on July 2, 2013 at 5:06 am

      Who’s the protagonist? The schizoid daughter or…? Who is doing the “must-ing”?

      Must an FBI agent use the daughter because he/she has nowhere else to turn?

      Or must she must help them because.. well, why would she help them? What’s the inducement, what are the stakes for her (if she’s the protagonist)?

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    11. TOAST
      2013-07-02T04:53:39+10:00Added an answer on July 2, 2013 at 4:53 am

      Double check your mental illnesses, noting the difference between Schizoidal, Schizotypal, Schizophrenic, Delusional, Psychotic, Bipolar, Hikkikomori, and just “weird”.

      If you insist on “Schizoid” do your research. Although I suggest it may be way easier for you to choose “reclusive” or “socially phobic”. Even if you can do it justice you’re going to waste pages and pages of plot trying to “explain” it to the audience.

      Even then, being Schizoid isn’t necessarily a fatal flaw. Cf John Nash in A Beautiful Mind. Indeed for an FBI analyst, being Schizoid may actually be an asset.

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